User talk:Minkai, the Legendary Drunk

Hi, welcome to Death Note Fan Fiction Wiki! Thanks for your edit to the Kizu page.

Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! -- KyleH (Talk) 02:10, 13 April 2009

Questions to improve Lo
Did he do anything other than train in Taekwondo while at the dojo in S. Korea? For what reason did his father take him to a more dangerous country to live in? Which Kira killed his father (no need to give specifically who: an indication, such as a period of time, would be a good indication of who), and why? After his father died, what did Lo do in order to stay alive? Elaborate on how his "intellect bloomed": how and when did he begin to notice his own intelligence being of higher levels than the average person? Why did the police give him an opportunity to enter after so many rejections? What sort of work did he do, specifically, when he joined? If he rose through the ranks, what did he do to deserve promotions? If he went public in police uniform, how did people see him, and how did he respond to them? Did he try to figure out why the police group he was with was killed off by Kira? Why didn't all of the police officers die? How does joining Y make the police department more efficient: it's lacking manpower and a direct attack on the police would make the public scared of joining the department.

That is all I can come up with at the moment. As you develop your character further, I'll be asking more questions. --れび (talk to Lavi!) 03:05, 16 April 2009 (UTC)